Title: Flyboy

Written By: Parker North

Page One:

Panel One: (Way pulled out shot of two Mob looking goons dragging a younger small build guy across a rooftop toward the edge of the building. The guy being dragged is wearing a white t-shirt with the sleeves riding a little high up, blue jeans, and sneakers. He somewhat resembles Shaggy from Scooby-Doo but without a beard.)

FLYBOY:

“I told him I could get the money by tomorrow.”

GOON #1:

“That’s great but payment was due last week.”

Panel Two: (They reach the edge. FLYBOY is squirming as the two goons, one on each side, are pressing him against the railing.)

FLYBOY:

“No, please! I’ll pay you, personally. I’ll do whatever you want!”

GOON #2:

“Nope.”

Panel Three: (The Goons pushed FLYBOY up and over the railing. Shot is from slightly above, we can see GOON #2 disappointed while GOON #1 is reaching out to try and grab FLYBOY to stop him from falling. FLYBOY has fallen just a little too far out of GOON #1’s reach.)

FLYBOY:

“AHHHHH!”

GOON #2:

“Aw — we weren’t supposed to drop him.”

Page Two:

Panel One: (Not quite from a street level view but still looking up toward FLYBOY as he has fallen half the height of the building. He has turned around so now he’s facing/falling toward the camera.)

Panel Two: (FLYBOY is about a foot or two off of the ground. He has his hands reached out as though to catch himself. Some dust, litter, and a newspaper has kicked up into the air, swirling around him. He has a confused/shocked look on his face.)

FLYBOY:

“Huh?”

“Holy shit – I’m flying!”

Panel Three: (FLYBOY rockets off towards into the air. We can see the rooftop of the building below him. GOON 1 and GOON 2 are looking up at him.)

GOON 2:

“Hey, get back here!”

GOON 1:

“I don’t think he’s coming back.”

Page Three:

Panel One: (Large panel. FLYBOY is up above the city. Not high enough up to be in the clouds but a fair distance above to where can still see stuff off in the distance. One of the things we can see a fair distance away is a major airport. FLYBOY is hanging in the the air in a Superman-esque pose but has his head cocked slightly to the side looking at his pocket.)

Sound Effect:

“BZZRT BZZRT”

Panel Two: (Bust shot of FLYBOY with his phone up in front of him like he’s talking on Face Time.)

FLYBOY:

“Dude, you’re not going to believe what’s happening right now!”

Panel Three: (FLYBOY has been struck by an airplane. We can see him bouncing/spinning of off the nose of the airliner along the side of it that is facing the camera. His phone has been knocked from his hand.)

Sound Effect:

“CRRACCCKK!”

Panel Four: (Cut to a really wide shot as the jet engine spits out a red mist and flies off away from the camera.)

Panel Five: (The Goons are running for the stairwell. They have their hands up blocking falling pieces of FLYBOY.)

GOON 1:

“Well, he came back…”

GOON 2:

“Dibs on his phone!”

- The End -

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